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Do you like clouds? I've always been a big fan but now staring at my favourite shapes in the sky feels rather cynical. Six feet farther than they usually tend to be, I can almost taste them, yes I can. Yes I can. I am the clouds, the ones which emerge from the smoke as I leave behind this body of ash. I'm flying high, don't you see? I always told you I would. I'll finally reach the sky. So don't look down with those tears falling from your eyes. Reach up, can you feel me now?

(I think I'm really enjoying this form of poetry writing, I'd love to hear your views!)

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/MlweUDKRcM

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the anatomy of grief

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They asked me to dissect it actually. Breaking it down might make it easier to digest, they said. But the more I twist this knife, the deeper it gets and I bleed, frankly it's too much red for me. And they say, that's good actually. They told me to address this pain, all the memories we made, so I held a vigil. They all came, all the memories and I dug this hole too, but sat myself in the grave. Wait, wasn't I claustrophobic? They told me I'd be angry but I've always been rather accepting. How morbid it is, to shop for coffins. I know you love red but I find pink rather than an attractive colour on you. They tell me I'm in shock, they tell me a lot of things actually. I've been handed scal

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the anatomy of grief

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They asked me to dissect it actually. Breaking it down might make it easier to digest, they said. But the more I twist this knife, the deeper it gets and I bleed, frankly it's too much red for me. And they say, that's good actually. They told me to address this pain, all the memories we made, so I held a vigil. They all came, all the memories and I dug this hole too, but sat myself in the grave. Wait, wasn't I claustrophobic? They told me I'd be angry but I've always been rather accepting. How morbid it is, to shop for coffins. I know you love red but I find pink rather than an attractive colour on you. They tell me I'm in shock, they tell me a lot of things actually. I've been handed scalp

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