BEYOND THE PALE MIRROR ACTIVE STORY

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ozlWCmrXBY3aUqjc8t-CnL4bC8UHU3ncSm4fP2Ayb90/edit?usp=sharing

I don't have Word so I'm stuck with Google Docs. This is an active work in progress so you can see what's going on. I don't expect too many views and definitely no comments / anyone to read the whole thing but here it is, if it ever explodes in fame. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated.