Better way to write this

Hello, this is my first time actually writing any music, but I've been playing for years, and I've been really inspired by Eternity: memory of light and waves, and also To Zanarkland from Final Fantasy, so decided to start writing this, but I was wondering if there was anything different shut put down that would make this easier to read or just make it look better https://drive.google.com/file/d/1yQE0G61LI4RWDVq0QxbkclcX39X1 0WBY/View?usp= drivesdk