Bobby, Peter, Billy, Danny

This post will look at the sons in G H Lawrence's stories. They're all different, but they all have similar traits and circumstances.

First, they're all good looking, well built, very well hung young men. Second, they all have gorgeous, busty mothers. That's important to note, at least for me; too many mother/son stories have a line where they talk about how the mother isn't that hot, which always leads me to think "then why are you doing something as fucked up as having sex with her?" With Lawrence, they're doing it because their moms are the hottest women on the planet. Hell, the title of the first story tells you Bobby and his mother are both Built For One Thing.

I'll be straight with you, if I could be any fictional character, I'd be Bobby Arden. He is the best of Lawrence's protagonists, the least problematic, and the best written.

The others - Peter from Extortion and Billy and Danny from I Dare You, all have issues (other than wanting to fuck their mothers, obviously).

Peter, after bribing a hotel clerk and setting up a camera in a hotel room to film his mother's adultery, literally blackmails her with the tape to have sex with her. Even in the fucked up world of mom/son sex stories, that's a little dodgy, isn't it?

Billy, the narrator of I Dare You, is frankly, a bit of a dick. He and his twin brother (slightly less of a dick, in my opinion) play a constant back and forth game of increasing dares that seem obnoxious, Billy throws an illegal chop block in a football game, and when Claudia stops the massage where he - and we - think he might go further, he jacks off "I went upstairs, got in the shower, and angrily jacked a load of semen out of my throbbing cock onto the tile wall. I was fantasizing about Mom, of course, but it was different this time. I was fantasizing about raping her."

That is fucked up. Bobby wouldn't do that. Even Peter, with his blackmail, I don't think would do that.

Hell, before his mother arrives in his doorway holding the infamous black velvet demi-bra and matching panties, Bobby has all but given up on his dream "such notions were beginning to
depress me. It was madness. She was my mother and sex would simply never
happen."

Even after they've had sex, Bobby is still kind of passive - he tries, but when Jill's roadblocks go up, he doesn't push the matter. I don't think you'd get that with Billy or Danny.

There are also hints from Billy that he's not better than his brother, despite his claims (yes, Claudia tells him he's better in bed, but other than that it's not clear he actually is.)

When they're all having sex for the first time, Billy says the orgasm she gets from Danny is less intense than he one he gave her, then he has to admit, after a screaming orgasm, it was pretty intense.

When they're in the pool, instead of fucking their gorgeous sister and mother, they do laps underwater "And, of course, we had to make a competition out of it. I won the first race handily but he barely beat me in a best two out of three. Prick."

When Bobby arrives, there's a moment when all three are in the backyard, and again Billy doesn't come out on top again "After dinner, Bobby, Danny and I took a football to the back yard. There was still plenty of twilight, and Danny and I wanted to see his moves. And indeed, he was as good in the backfield as he was on top of his mother. He dogged me like a one o'clock shadow as I tried to break open a sideline pattern and Danny waited to throw me a bomb. Danny finally fired. After a dramatic mid-air scuffle, Bobby came down with it."

One of the best bits in this sequence is when they ask Bobby about his first time with Jill, and he admits he was nervous. "Hell, yeah. I couldn't believe it was finally happening and I was afraid I wouldn't do her good enough. But then I slid my cock into her and she started screaming. She was pleased. Very pleased." I like that we have this insight from Bobby about an event we know so well.

So, that's my thoughts on the sons. Bobby is great, Peter is a bit fucked up, but from a fucked up family, Billy is a dick with a chip on his shoulder and a need to be top dog when he isn't, and Danny probably is the dominant twin; he's the one who first suggests sex with their mom might be possible.

Let me know what you think about these sons, and what you don't like about them, what you do like, and what you'd change.