Can I get a beta up in here for a one-shot smut thing?

It's obviously a work in progress, and will be my first piece with smut in it, so yay! Here is the thing:

Thor’s suitcase lands with a heavy thud where it was dropped beside the door. “Loki,” he calls as he toes off his shoes, “I’m home.” There is shuffling from the bedroom, accompanied by muffled expletives. “Are you alright?”

The reply is quick. “Yes, damn it. Just stay where you are.”

Thor shrugs defensively beneath his white dress shirt, creased from hours at work. “Will I be pleasantly surprised?

He is met by an exasperated sigh, “I suppose that is the point. Now, close your eyes.” Thor obeys and his ears strain in the silence. He hears the metered tap of shoes against the tiled floor followed by a whispered ‘open’ by his ear.

He turns towards the voice, opening his eyes, “Damn.”

Loki’s narrow waist is defined by a dangerously tight, black corset and /are those fishnet stockings/. “I assume you are pleased,” he says curtly. Thor can only nod in response. “Allow me to assure you that this serves more purposes than just to show,” with deft fingers, he undoes Thor’s tie, “and I am certain you know just what they are.”

"I have an inkling," Thor says as he snakes his hands around Loki’s middle, pulling him close.

Loki moans. “Tell me then, darling. Use your words.” Smartass.

"I believe," he begins, "that you plan for me to throw you to the bed and fuck you open until all you know is to moan my name."

"Yes," Loki breathes, "just what I was thinking."

{insert more build}

The low guttural growl that emanates from Thor’s chest sounds almost like thunder as he pulls Loki into a crushing kiss, knocking over lamps and a vase during their dashed scramble to the sofa. “You’re mine,” he {somethings} as he claims Loki’s neck in a bite, “mine.”

"Then fuck me already," Loki moans against Thor’s lips, fingers twisted in his hair.

Thor snaps the waistband of Loki’s underwear [panties? eh.] in warning. “Not yet,” he growls, “patience.” {insert butt-fingering and shit}{insert fuckery}