Let Go Of Me (Working Title)

Workshop

(V#-Verse, PC-Pre-Chorus, B-Bridge)

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V1

I am talkin' sins

And you're tryna make sense

Of a senseless situation and

We are hardly sinless

Sitting in the back

Of your car

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(PC)

I know it

You know it

We both know

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C

Don't you care what you do to me

You set me up and walk right through me

With this love that you're still grooming

But you forgot so I guess screw me

You chew me up and spit me out

With every word out of my mouth

Truth or lie, I still die

Whether or not I'm by your side

Gonna say it one more time

Make up your mind

Or let go of me

Please

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V2

Waves are crashin' down and

You drown me but I'm flashin' you a

Pieced-together smile and I

Hate you with a passion but

Dear we both know that's a lit

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C

Don't you care what you do to me

You set me up and walk right through me

With this love that you're still grooming

But you forgot so I guess screw me

You chew me up and spit me out

With every word out of your mouth

Truth or lie, I still dies

Whether or not I'm by your side

Gonna say it one one more time

Make up your mind

Or let go of me

Please

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B

You still me

You thrill me

You kill me

You fill me up and empty me out

You woke me

You broke me

I'm chokin'

You're stokin'

The flames as I shout

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C

Don't you care what you do to me

You set me up and walk right through me

With this love that you're still grooming

But you forgot so I guess screw me

You chew me up and spit me out

With every word out of your mouth

Truth or lie, I still die

Whether or not I'm by your side

Gonna say it one more time

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Don't you care what yo do to me?

You set me up and walk right through me

With thisw love that you're still grooming

But you forgot so I guess screw me

You chew me up and spit me out

With every word out of your mouth

Truth be told, it's all lies

Not gonna stand by your side

Swear to god, this is the last time

This is goodbye

I've let go of you

Ooh

So don't chase after me

God, I feel so weak

Beggin' on my knees

Please

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Previously proofread poems:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/10010si/comment/j2hjlxw/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/100dahh/my_religion/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

Posted Jan 1, 2023, 10:24 AM UTC

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