Moment

Poem

Lying next to you

Feeling your touch

Your warmth

Your love

Breathing in

Trying to etch into memory

As indelibly as you are in my heart

Wishing to stop time

And spend eternity in this moment

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I wanted to say how much I appreciate this sub and all the great people who have taken time to give me some well thought feedback on my poetry. I have to admit. I was very nervous about sharing something so personal with people.

Thank you,

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/101v916/comment/j2q3nik/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/100dcso/comment/j2igx3e/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

Posted Jan 3, 2023, 5:48 AM UTC

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