**Howdy, DestructiveReaders!**

I primarily have done work as a copyeditor, but, as for doctors and hairdressers, it is sometimes difficult to edit one's own work!  Editor, edit thyself.  I'm sure there are many, many things in this work that can use improvement, and I'm excited to see what y'all come up with.

**Story**: [**Google Doc Link**](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P5-8QrY62e1Q-nDmov-jKwvfJ0LycQSSL0D40doKaDc/edit?usp=sharing) **(Comments in Reddit Preferred!)**

I'm up for anything you'd like to give me: grammar, structure, story.  If you want a quicker, more specific template, doing "Good/Bad/Ugly" or "I liked/I didn't like/I am confused about" or something similar!

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**Critiques**:

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*Mods: This is my first post, so please let me know if these critiques to not count towards this story; I will remove the post for leeching.*

[956] The General