[1504] The Lucky Dei Society (Ch 1) -- Upmarket/Lit Fic
This is the first chapter of an 80,000 word novel with speculative elements (although they don't show up until a few chapters in). I am a little unsure how to classify it. I'm pitching it as a book with the quirkiness of a George Saunders story and the atmosphere of the Slough House series if it were set in L.A. I occasionally comp Touch by Claire North or The First 15 Lives of Harry August. Not sure if that's necessary to know, but there you go. Love any feedback you can offer. Thanks!
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Posted Mar 21, 2023, 8:58 PM UTC · edited
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