[1968] Petrified Tide - Chapter One

Hi everyone, this is the first chapter of a novel I've written. It's a little heavy with the swearing and I was wondering if that's too much. With the main character being in her late teens I was wondering if you thought it was more of a YA story with too much adult language (which I can tone down).

Other questions:

What do you think of the title?

How about the first line?

Are they interesting or too pedestrian?

Does this first chapter make you want to keep reading?

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y5HNzBD7v35PBE_kpVcmIKDrpvx57LixUCE79_PFBJ8/edit

Critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11s08e7/comment/jcsphgl/?context=3

Sorry that my critique is a little on the older end. Is there an expiration on how old it can be?

Edit: I guess some people were flagging me for leeching. Here is another critique I did: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11r11y7/1360_unwilting/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button