Today's my day
Today's my day I'm thankful
Though at times I known I'm a handful
I could have missed today
I didn't have to win the fight for life
Looking through the window at the sun
Is proof alive this day is destined for fun
The birds I hear chirping early in the morning
Made my heart beat with excitement
They chord melodies of sweetness ever so gently in their mood of meekness
Their attitude their temperament
Their natural tendencies of being a flute
From a babe to a boy
From a boy to a youth
From a youth to a youngman
From a to youngman to a polished gentleman.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/129yfsl/that_was_a_really_nice_day/
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/126rj3u/dark_chocolate/
Posted Apr 3, 2023, 2:36 PM UTC
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