[912] The Burn

Hemingbird · 2023-04-15T20:32:35.000Z

Link: [The Burn](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qLWzoddr_ZRMCVDWviDYDntCyAGe-QiDRkjwnVkfeGI/edit?usp=sharing) Brief short story. I'm curious how the ending comes across. Does it stick the landing? Any and all thoughts are welcomed. **Critiques** [\[1360\] Mostly Dead Ch 1](https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11s8n9r/1360_mostly_dead_ch_1/jcgdld4/) [\[2287\] Untitled Indulgence](https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11d2b18/2287_untitled_indulgence/ja8gd2w/) [\[2918\] The Rites of Pain v2](https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/113was1/the_rites_of_pain_v2_first_ten_pages_2918/j97gs1m/) [\[1077\] I'll Carry You In Buckets](https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/113vuw6/1077_ill_carry_you_in_buckets/j8xf1vu/)

Short Story

Link: The Burn

Brief short story.

I'm curious how the ending comes across. Does it stick the landing? Any and all thoughts are welcomed.

Critiques

[1360] Mostly Dead Ch 1

[2287] Untitled Indulgence

[2918] The Rites of Pain v2

[1077] I'll Carry You In Buckets

Posted Apr 15, 2023, 8:32 PM UTC

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