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clobsterone

Total Emotional Consumption

Poem

Drunk from beer and aperitif

More intoxicated by the acoustics of her laughter

With classic beauty from another age

like she walked out of a Renoir page

Tender touches on the tight fit couch

Letting fingers creep accross buttery skin

like kudzu on southern plantations

Soft moans in thrown blankets

I can smell your hesatant anticipation

And taste your release once boundaries are crossed

Asleep in morning glow with comfortable embrace

Stuck in my cognisance like a satin memory

Acceptance of total emotional consumption

Lost between the slow space of separation

Closed eyed recollection urges self gratification

Waiting for reciprocal coloquial incantation

She sleeps with radiating warmth of soul

Obsessed with her contours in the moon light

Passionate and absolute once distance dissipated

Entwined cerebral with galavanting inquisitive lips

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Posted Apr 17, 2023, 7:11 PM UTC

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Denbrough86•

So many amazing lines in this poem. “ More intoxicated by the acoustics of her laughter” That’s my favorite. Very well done.

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