[1630] Derogatory term for spouse

This is a simple scene. I wrote it as an exercise in conflict.

I fear it might be cliché. Any suggestions to midigate that?

Is the scene interesting? What do you think of the structure? Does the resolution come too quickly?

Thanks!

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My text: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSBbtbafwX5R0vPAlGHPxkgaNDha536IHIYWc4WtwB5JsmIJj4nQqxoLbzw7UaLt_5g6VIAq73BeGR7/pub