[967] The Winter King

This is chapter 1 of my current manuscript, The Winter King. It's a 26,600 word middle-grade fantasy novel for ages 8-12 currently in its 2nd draft. Enjoy.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/176QrWvuFOcWuF35h7op69n_7t3OSHOnsoouxnhN13wA/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critiques: [1236] https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/13a3hsi/1236_secrets/

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