[1716] The Myths of Growing Up: Prologue

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Here's a prologue/intro to a book I'm writing. It's fiction but will be written in a sort of journal/autobiography form. The story revolves around a boy who just graduated from high school and is struggling to process the change in his life.

Later chapters will focus on him recounting important parts of his childhood, showing how his personality changed and what he believes led to him being unable to cope with becoming an adult.

The prologue is just to setup the narrator's thoughts on his current state in life.

TW - Dead dog

Some specific questions I had were:

1. Is the difference between the narrator's musings and reality too hard to follow?
2. Is there too much content packed into the prologue?

The Myths of Growing Up: Prologue