[2192] Demon on a Foreign Shore

Hello, prose-annihilators! Back at my old tricks. Thank you as ever for your kind critical attention.

Crit: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14rzsx6/3288_part_33_white_summer/

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11eYHTnCfqzLdp5TzOsmmfLkhsAiW1wfw6E9oRjObu9E/edit