[732] Asher, opening scene.

Hey all, This is a new story but it takes place in the same Universe as all my other stuff. It's part od the same anthology I've posted a lot of stories from on here. I've been working g with a mentor. He really made me want to finally sit and write this. I've had this story in my head for years.

In my opinion, all feedback is good feedback. So don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. I can take her critiques. This is an early draft so I know it's not perfect. Feel free to rip it to pieces.

I normally don't post here from my phone. I'm on my phone now because I don't have a choice. So if my link isn't working or anything please let me know so I can correct it.

Thanks

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qqCfTNdWwnfkeArQYsnPG3ZoohL_5cJ5W7mQwR1dISg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Recent Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1510v5i/1515_jessa_remembers_everything/js9bisg?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=2