[1480] Draugma Skeu, character intro

This is Chapter 3 of a novel, but it introduces a new character, so you don't need to read earlier chapters to understand this one. It does make a few references to the earlier chapters, but that's all.

Questions:

Where does it drag or get boring?

How well is information about the world released? Is there too much? Not enough?

How interesting is Tesni as a character?

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Story: Tesni's intro