[990] Chapter 1: Drink. Fiction.

This is my first try at creative writing, so understandably, it's not going to be much of a masterpiece. I am looking forward to all the critiques.

My critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14a1oad/comment/jocaogx/?context=3

My submission: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eJRoe8g8eREKHArawwl-\_fRVRMD6YrOb/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=114622070325323541108&rtpof=true&sd=true