[548] Sector L7 [intro to Chp.1] V2

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Hi. Took the most recent feedback of including a bit of Bronte’s history, personality, and wants in the opener before moving on to the rest of the squad—here’s my attempt at that. Would you read on?

SECTOR L7

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For those not familiar, Sector L7 is a Sci-Fi/Thriller story in the works about a climate struck world fighting over some GMO bug shit.

Any and all feedback is appreciated, cheers!