[633] Fluff
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This is the current opening scene of Fluff, a surreal thriller that follows a woman whose coddled life is carefully maintained to keep her mental illness at bay. It starts to unwind as she begins to believe that a stranger she has seen from her window is stalking her.
[TW: abstract reference/allusion to eating disorders]
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This is my first post so I'm curious to see how the writing is perceived outside of my echo chamber (lol).
Specifically, should you wish to oblige:
- what do you think of the vibe? Does it feel immersive?
- would you be interested in reading on?
Thank you very much for your labour!
Posted Aug 3, 2023, 10:55 AM UTC
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