[1520] Arcanist For Hire

This is the first chapter of the fantasy novel I'm writing. All comments are welcome, especially those regarding the story, characters, and pacing.

Thank you for your critique!

Google doc (comments enabled): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qt-tNyHcCDN19-nkxIcpV4FE_TQ6avfSPvJw6YdDAVo/edit?usp=sharing

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