[2037] Reclamation Chapter 1[1/4]

The full chapter is around 8400 words. It is a fantasy story, taking place on another world from a perspective of a young protagonist.
I would like some general feedback. Whatever you do not like or like, just tell me. All feedback is welcome.
My wish is to get as much feedback as possible so i can understand how people view this story and if it is even readable. Chapter one starts off introducing the main character, the problems he is facing among other things. Chapter two will introduce other races more profoundly, as I did not want to info dump everything in the beginning.
I will do some more critiquing myself to post the rest of this chapter coming week, with around 3 days intervals. Thank you!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yo9gbZnBOFB8G19-1PT0MOVF2BcFLt\_nHOJWydfZ14I/edit?usp=share\_link
Critiques:
[\[1983\]](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/15fk5sz/1983\_draugma\_skeu\_chapter\_1/jurokvh/?context=3)
[\[1427\]](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/15hbhsc/1427\_zack\_static/juragyp/?context=3)
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