[2429] Smile...

Smile... is a short story based on a Lockdown prompt challenge. It was kind of my first try at writing short stories. I'm usually more of a novelist, but I wanted to have a go at it. I was playing around a little with the idea of dream-like time flowing in a more concrete way. I don't know how I did with that, but it was a fun little story, and it would be cool to get feedback on it.

Some of the specific things I wondered are:

• Is there too much packed into the length? Does it affect the pacing?
• Does Maya seem like a bit of a caricature?

With that all being said, here is the story. And for the mods:

Concrit 1 - 593, Concrit 2 - 983 Concrit 3 - 837