[2,103] Fangs Destined For Repossession

This is the first chapter of a rewritten novel and the restart to a rewritten trilogy. It's been torn apart before. And I'm no stranger to gathering up a tattered heart and doing some sewing. In fact, I'm a masochist. So, hurt me please whether with grammatical nitpick or the suggestion that this never be allowed to sear the eyes of another reader ever again.

My Main Concern

• Is this too much of an info dump? I wanted to establish the reason behind the world's state so as to prevent confusion but maybe it's still confusing or just too much all at once.
• If yes, at what point did your eyes gloss over?

My Critiques

Smile [2429]

The Entertainer [730]

The Partial of Chapter One

Be Amused (You Have My Permission)

Thank you to any and all who spare a look. I submit to your destroying.

P.S. There are mentions of violence and the occasional swear word.