[1870] The First Witch Familiar

Hi all--

Looking for some feedback on a short story. Was looking for feedback on:

1 - character impressions

2 - pacing

3 - theme/message

4 - prose/imagery

Content warnings: Nothing too explicit, but there's references to sex, foul language, and (as the title suggests) witchcraft.

Story link

[2103] Fangs destined for repossession

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