[2806] I'm Nathan, Dammit

Hi all. Back again and now trimmed of a good 1,500 words, please see linked the opening chapter to "I'm Nathan, Dammit!", a sci-fi/dark comedy about a man who stumbles upon a peculiar-looking corpse in his new flat.

Opening Chapter: I'm Nathan, Dammit!

Critiques:

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[2653] Conscript (Ch. 1)

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