[1375] Death is Innocent

This is a short story inspired by a prompt I found on r/writingprompts.

Prompt: when you died you didn't expect what you saw, a little kid who claimed to be the grim reaper

I just want to get feedback on my writing in general to see how I can improve it. I'm a new author.

Google doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hpKH_pDQD90f2M5rIizq_s-AAnYA6rdvprmU4VkD_vk/edit?usp=sharing

my previous critique: [1401]