[687] The Colours of an Arm

Another shortie. A dark and unsettling tale of obsession and deception set in the desert. Has something in common with Bowles' more freakish and unsettling stories. Some readers have said Arm reminds them of work from Kafka, Murakami or Angela Carter.

Questions? Does it work? Is there enough for the reader to 'get 'the story? If there are shortfalls, where do they occur and how can they be remedied? How's the length?

There's a short song that accompanies this. It's why God put me on this fair green muckball. Music and fiction. Hope they both work for you. (the actual song is still in production)

CritsThe Perfect Man

The Horizon Effect

Sotham on Sea

​

Thanks again for your prying eyes

My short

The Colours of an Arm