[2235] Stolen Flowers
Hello! This is my first post, I hope i've done everything correctly! I'm open to any kind of feedback to the general flow/storyline to individual metaphors/descriptions. I'm curious about the ending, if people like how it wraps up, if it makes sense switching back and forth through tenses/perspectives. If there are any lines that aren't necessary or things that should be expanded more. LMK and thank you for reading!
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[2290] Form H-311
Posted Sep 22, 2023, 2:01 AM UTC
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