[1677] Innocent Witches Never Burn Twice

Hey, I've been working on this story for past couple of weeks, but I can't quite seem to make it "work" so do your worst and give me some ideas! I'm also trying to cut down the word count to 1500 so, again, I would love to know what parts of the story do and don't work or if the story doesn't exactly work in its entirety. Thanks!

Story: Innocent Witches Never Burn Twice

Critique: [1835] Character intro for a fantasy novel

Posted Oct 20, 2023, 1:18 AM UTC

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