TW: Sexual Assault, Teen Pregnancy, Eating Disorder

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Critiques:

* [\[1534\]  Untitled college story - Chapter 1](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/184vffv/comment/kb1cwn7/?utm_source=reddit&utm_medium=web2x&context=3)
* [\[1300\] NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/184zzsx/comment/kb4mgge/?utm_source=reddit&utm_medium=web2x&context=3)
* [\[755\] Title Undecided](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/185bljg/comment/kb1h76l/?utm_source=reddit&utm_medium=web2x&context=3)

I previously posted chapter 1 for review, so if it looks familiar that's why! I incorporated the feedback I received and wanted to post it along with chapter 2 so there's context as to what's happening in the second chapter, as well as to see if I was actually successful in my revisions.

In my previous post, the big critique was telling not showing. I'm specifically looking to know if I improved in this area, but I'm also open to any other feedback y'all are willing to provide.

Thank you for your time! Here's [I Think I’m Becoming A Mom - Chapters 1 and 2](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Fxb1go30IW7Q8vxtxOsOqPBtGUyJal4vRTB22K0crbQ/edit?usp=sharing).

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[2923] I Think I’m Becoming A Mom - Chapters 1 and 2