[2025] - The Liminal Thread (Pt 3)

This is part 3 of a story I've been sharing here. I included a portion of what I shared last time in the hopes that it would be easier for people to give me feedback in this context. I'll link the previous excerpts as well in case anyone wants them.

Dogtooth is an unlikely protaganist who's been compelled by outside forces to intervene in a dangerous situation

Story

Part One

Part Two

Crits:

Ave, I - 1036

Untitled fantasy book - 2489

(Playing with fire, but I hope my crits are enough to get this through! I have a couple more banked if necessary, and have put a lot into trying to make these acceptable)