[2109] Another Day at the Office

Hello everyone,
This is a part of a much longer narrative that I am writing and wish to get some feedback on. To set a bit of context, the lead character is a reluctant microbiologist studying the effects of a rather elusive virus. I have hopefully added necessary comments into the doc where things might have been unclear (i.e. characters previously introduced)
Things that would be helpful are parts where it rambles or it seems to be nothing more than a mish-mash of words on the page.
Story
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hP2xnHYk4muBk2yiyMWkHjVMTj8J46IzgeNq1TojQGQ/edit?usp=sharing
Crits
[1480] Eyes - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/188unw5/comment/kbsw5pd/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3
[2389] The isolated Knight - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/185ejdo/comment/kbu1v72/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

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Shorter one

[1405] The Fourteenth Streeters - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/18834up/comment/kbvc980/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3