[1440] The Greatest Family in Madison Indiana- Chapter 1

Hey guys! This is the first half of the first chapter of a short story/novella I'm writing.

This is the first draft of the chapter so I'd really appreciate feedback on anything!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1860v5G5KR-Qy9joqwuspProF8qOZew_nzKbLb6Nvasg/edit?usp=sharing

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Thanks for reading!