[3898] I Am A Stillbirth Walking

I Am A Stillbirth Walking

This is a short story which I wrote recently, and which I'm planning to submit to literary journals. In keeping with that goal, I'm looking to polish this piece to the necessary standards. What is your response to the piece? Does it produce an effect in you? Do this piece offer a fresh take on the subject of mob behavior, or is it a retread of a well-worn subject which offers little that's new? What are the aspects of the piece which require further development or improvement? Does the piece justify being written? Overall, what is your interpretation of the piece and its story?

[Banked Critique 4124 words: pt. 1 pt. 2 pt.3]

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