[947] Emerald from the Swamp - Chapter 1

Hello!

First of all, happy new year to everyone!

I'm writing this story based on my playthrough of the videogame Kenshi. The universe is based on it, so I guess it's a fanfic, but I'm trying to write it in a way that is accessible for people who don't know the game.

Main concerns:

-Cliche main character. I know she is, and she's based on my actual character from the game, but let me know if it's too much.

-Overwriting descriptions

-Pacing

Here's the link to the first chapter.

Critique:

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