[1000] The Good News - Short Story

Hi, guys! This is my first post here, but I think I am doing it correctly. I have written a short story for class, and I am required to get some feedback on the piece from other people. Any help here is greatly appreciated.

I did have several requirements for the piece, including length and many bits of content.

Mostly, I want to know if anything is confusing or unclear. Any general impressions or advice, no matter what it is, is welcome.

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*Content Warning:* There are some allusions to abuse, but nothing that happens "on screen."

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Thanks!

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My Critique

My Story

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