[1500] LIMR-ENS
A short story I worked on recently that ended up taking some unexpected turns. Originally written as part of therapy-mandated journaling, I got a better idea and ran with it lol.
Overall I want to know if I struck the right balance between the first half and the latter. Any other critiques are totally welcome, too.
Critiques:
Posted Feb 12, 2024, 10:21 PM UTC
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