[1500] LIMR-ENS

Speculative Sci-Fi

A short story I worked on recently that ended up taking some unexpected turns. Originally written as part of therapy-mandated journaling, I got a better idea and ran with it lol.

Overall I want to know if I struck the right balance between the first half and the latter. Any other critiques are totally welcome, too.

Google Docs link here.

Critiques:

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[1000] The Good News

Posted Feb 12, 2024, 10:21 PM UTC

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