[1043] Peppermint Tea

Hello all,

I will pre apologize in that this is part of a book I am working on and is a middle chapter. The style of it is different from the rest in that it contains no dialogue and is a single character's thoughts. I tried to make a comment in the doc for appropriate context and hope it is clear but could have easily overlooked something.

What I really would like to know is (i) do you think this would work as either a stand-alone chapter or a section of another and (ii) is it too heady (meaning hypothetical, detached from reality, etc)?

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Google Doc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WPHIZUSbn--BD78yQ-fofKbo4etlhyMJBNesOyNr8oQ/edit?usp=sharing

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Critiques

[1378] Snoop - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1ba18ss/comment/kvdrugw/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

[1728] Echoes of Evergreen - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1an8em7/comment/kpvi2i4/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3