[887] Eva Chapter 1

Hello,

This is the first half of the first chapter of my WIP.

Eva Chapter One

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I posted the prologue to this about a week ago and got some really good feedback so I'm back for more. As I said in my previous post I'm new to writing so I'm still unsure of what I should be looking out for/focusing on in order to improve.

Thank you!

CRIT

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