[2413] Alex through the G-Whole Glass

Hello

This is Chapter 1 of my first novel It is a near future dystopian black comedy with some SCI-FI set in the UK.

This is an establishing chapter really about the state of the main protagonist.

I guess I want know what you feel about him? what about his age?

Does the chapter set the scene?

Is it funny at times if so which and which fall flat?

Is it boring?

Is it too British/English?

Is the length ok?

Are you interested in what happens next?

What would you expect to see happen next?

Is there anything else that you think when you read it?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sD4YDMJJv-w1zPICmsJ-7H3EYwu1jSoSVt9TNYm4O1Y/edit?usp=sharing

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