[2204] From Tree To Tree

Hi all,
This is chapter two of a novel. In chapter one my main character got into a fight with his abusive father and is now running away from home. This chapter starts right as he is walking out onto the road, literally.
In my opinion, all feedback is good feedback. Harsh critiques don't offend me. So don't be afraid to be honest. I know my writing isn't perfect and constructive criticism helps me improve.
Anyway, here is chapter 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s6yF2OQjbmYxj09myuJQzgbbNj9wERRD8w0llG7\_eIA/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks in advance,
V.
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