[1700] Anthill V2

Previous critiques of mine below:

[824] Kintsugi https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1cyqux7/824_kintsugi/l5vk49b/

[1480] Valistry https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1cztw36/1480_valistry_chapter_3_part_i/

This is a rework of the first chapter I posted under the same title a few days ago. This is my fifth completed manuscript, and I am hoping to traditionally publish. I am interested in the chapter's grabbing power in addition to whatever feedback the community may have.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EGK8r14fCv4TqT3vy7yCpQRWKEJEXq14cLJvP6iaQlI/edit?usp=sharing