[561] An Ending (wip, unfinished)

my criticism

I wrote this today. I originally had another thing that I wanted to post, but the final version is in my notes and I locked it and forgot the password, and the original sucks so bad I don't want to read it (very pretentious). This is a lot less pretentious, and hopefully better, but it might not be focused enough. Anyways, here's the link