My first poem

My first poem- I’m fine

So this is my first ever poetry I have ever written I would appreciate some feedback.

Oh world I’m fine

Surrounded by laughter and smiles

In a lake i drown

Words I can’t describe

Feelings I can’t express

Upon the wall my emptiness sprout

too many words To let out

Oh world I’m fine

Emptiness I can’t understand

Thoughts I can’t fathom

Grabbing the mask from the stand

Putting on a smile so grand

Oh world I’m fine

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