[910] Chapter 1: A Recording of Doubts

This is my first submission. I've been reviewing people's writing here recently and I've grown in appreciation for the craft of writing. And critiquing. Both bring me pain, but I love creating.

I submit: [910] Chapter 1: A Recording of Doubts. It is not the full chapter, because I'm still plotting everything out, but also I haven't really decided if I like the story the way I've pictured it so far.

All feedback is welcome, harsh critiques won't offend me. I've spent so much time with this opening I need fresh takes. So feel free to let me have it. It probably won't move forward otherwise. Thanks in advance.

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