[1375] The Oracle (Short Story)

Hi Everyone,

Here is a link to a story I'm working on as a part of a larger collection of short stories. I'm about halfway through with the collection of what will hopefully be 10 stories. Anyways, I'd love to have some feedback.

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JBU5-M423Qvo4Jpzdfllt8YzJcsteZS7rE4kivLCEjc/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques: The Tent - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1fcwdbu/comment/lmfok06/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Frank's New Place - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1fb47ys/comment/lmn4aek/?context=3