[2014] Incompetent Ellie Part-3

Hey Everyone

This is the third and last scene of Chapter 1 in my book. Before this, my protagonist has basically been terrified of going to her father's funeral and is constantly doubting herself due to a lot of her childhood trauma. Now she is finally at the funeral. Minnie is her sister, Maxi is her brother. This book is supposed to explore self-worth, grief and trauma so is quite introspective. All comments are appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uTh5of0YjLKpy173tfS-zHDZ7YQUdDDfDwVuq_Tgahg/edit?usp=sharing

Here are the old scenes for context if you do need them. They are in no way required for this one.
Part 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NyePtdUmH6wEPQh2MJ1o5JaKxDaoc4qwjFH0LyB1Azw/edit?usp=sharing
Part 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xTCFRKEgDTTbTuDrJ_JCWorffZG_vLAME-Rc0VeRUfM/edit?usp=sharing

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